The Daleks
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(Doctor Who Story No. 2, starring William Hartnell)
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In-Depth Analysis Reviewby Martin Izsak |
WARNING: This review contains "SPOILERS", and is intended for those who have already seen the program. To avoid the spoilers, read the Buyers' Guide version instead. |
Doctor Who's second story is a true classic,
a major mythological milestone in the series that may arguably be
even more important than the show's first story.
Not surprisingly, the story went on to form the basis of a
Doctor Who feature film fairly quickly, although the television
version remains far more artistic and satisfying.
This atmospheric, philosophically rich version of the
story first put Doctor Who on the map and ensured the
program's popularity and longevity.
With the exception of Susan, our main characters are confined to the cell even more than previously, yet they also have more interesting things to do and scenes to perform. The Thals are introduced, and some great lines emphasize the contrast between them and the Daleks in the expertly juxtaposed scenes. The `action' at the end of the episode is pretty lame, with Ian pretty much pulling the Dalek suction cup up to his throat so he can get choked.
Thankfully, Richard Martin does get it mostly right this time, making episode three one of the more enjoyable ones of the story. The cliffhanger is a vast improvement on the previous episode as well.
The second story beat is one of the most memorable in the whole story, as Tristram Cary lays on his most interesting (and later most re-used) piece of Dalek music yet, building the creeping suspense enormously as the Daleks smoothly glide into hiding like the boogey-men in the closets that they represent - at last a scene truly worthy of sending the proverbial children behind the proverbial sofa to watch Doctor Who. Temmosus makes a grand and riveting speech, in praise of peaceful cooperation, proving Terry Nation's versatility in thinking and writing philosophically for adolescent and adult audiences, and that the story is about much more than a fight with bug-eyed monsters. There is a question of why Ian stands by for so long after arriving on the scene before he warns the Thals, but I guess he is polite, and doesn't want to interrupt a great speech.
Without wasting any time showing pointless transitional scenes of characters crossing from one set to another, we get the third story beat - the four travellers and the Thals have a friendly chat and take stock of their situation, while the Doctor takes a keen interest in the history of Skaro and its various cultures and peoples. More great Terry Nation style exploration beautifully written, acted, and directed. The cliffhanger is great, as the travellers realize they have to return to the city before they can leave, a point underscored by the horror on their faces and in Tristram Cary's music. The Doctor has lots to do in this one, but Ian is already emerging as the main character and beginning to steal the show by undertaking all of the crucial, heroic actions.
An interesting and excellent piece of music is played as Ian antagonizes the Thals, which doesn't quite fit here as well as it would do later for the advance of the aliens of Dido against the intruder in their temple next season. The Daleks have many scenes all on their own, something which doesn't always work in practice, but it gets pulled off well here, thanks to some expert direction. Finally we get to the swamp, which has a superb atmosphere thanks to a great montage of sound effects, more suspenseful direction, and minimal special effects `monster' shots. We get a nice creepy cliffhanger, too - it truly is more suspenseful to threaten minor characters, because the threat that the writer will actually bump them off is much, much more real and palatable to the audience.
Richard Martin is sometimes listed as a director who was confident and exuberant in tackling the technical problems associated with studio sci-fi adventures, special effects, and the Daleks in particular. True, but in these early days here he doesn't seem to display much affinity for being successfully ARTISTIC about it - camera angles often miss the mark of drawing the audience's attention to the next most natural item of interest that would move the story forward, actors appear uninspired, and scenes lack the emotion intended for them in the writing.
In the opening few shots, Ian says his lines while he is clumsily cut out of the shot by a slim margin and we are left to look at a collection of Thals standing around staring woodenly about. Later, Barbara and Ganatus crawl through the caves, stop, and Ganatus says, `Just look at that!' This is a truly lame moment, because the next most natural shot would be one of whatever they are looking at, which the director denies his audience. An actual shot might not actually help, because it is so dark that it might be impossible for the BW film audience to actually make out anything. But we are left to stare at the blank faces of Barbara and the Thal, which give no clue to what should be taking our interest at this point. This is not suspenseful, merely confusing. Nation's dialogue is partly to blame, because simply changing the line to "Ahh, it's a dead end, Barbara." will end the confusion and draw the audience's attention to where it should be, where it can understand the actors' expressions and emotions, and not beg the audience to look at something they can't see.
The Doctor makes his final heroic contribution, precisely one episode too early, and it isn't very well or believably directed either, but at least he has something crucial to do in the final struggle with the Daleks.
Then he and Susan sit on the floor for story-time with the Daleks!!! What is this? Prepare for some low shots which do more to simply cut the Daleks' intelligent features out of the top of the shot than to make them look menacing - not proper low-angle shots aiming upwards which might work, just low shots aiming level to show the Daleks' studded skirts and lots of empty floor. In this strangely shot scene, a couple of classic lines exchange between the Doctor and the Daleks:
Doctor: "But that's sheer murder!"
Dalek: "No, extermination!"
Apart from one other brief mention in episode three,
the Daleks' favourite word has yet to become popular.
Antodus gives the only really interesting performance in the episode, with his mounting reluctance to march bravely forward. It's often hard to stay awake during the practically transitional swinging across the chasm, until Antodus gets his turn. His agonizing cries make the drama for the riveting cliffhanger, but Ian's silence is totally unbelievable at this point - he's kept his head about him all episode and looked after the entire party, so why is he suddenly so unable to call for the help that he and Antodus need (and later get next episode)?
Antodus' death at the beginning of the episode is a good dramatic moment, and it is a shame that the movie version `Disney-ified' it to let him live, because it pretty much destroys the whole point of having a cave sequence, if indeed there is to be one beyond story padding.
We get a good final piece of incidental music to underscore the despair of Ian's party in the caves, when they think they've come to a final dead end. The directing is `on' here, with very good lighting effects, and a proper and interesting looking cut-away shot as Ian finds a way into the heart of the city.
The action-scenes are another matter. Most confusing is a sudden shot of a Thal crumpling to the floor in the famous `negative' effect - it is so badly placed in sequence and without a good view of his face that we have no idea where he is, who he is (is he a main Thal character or not?), what he was trying to do, how the Dalek found him, whether or not he gave away the position of Ian and the main group.....
Perhaps strangest of all is the fact that neither Ian, nor the Doctor, nor Alydon, Ganatus, or any major Thal character deal the Daleks the blow to stop their final plans - rather it is a nameless Thal extra who momentarily survives a direct Dalek blast by what must be an act of sheer will, to drive the Dalek into a console - a foreshadowing of Stien's later final action in "Resurrection of the Daleks" (story no. 134), which more appropriately had a dramatic build-up throughout the story and was thus more satisfying.
The Doctor's interference in the previous episode was not wide-spread enough to do much more than knock out a small defence system just long enough to let the main Thal party in. Ultimately, the Daleks do themselves in with their own greedy power drain, trying to give Skaro an extra melt-down. This `weakness' on their part may not fit with what they later became in the Doctor Who mythology, but it suits their original characters as single-story villains that they would not be able to sustain their complicated selves with no respect for the life surrounding them.
Post-climax, the drama is satisfying once more, as the Doctor collects himself and William Hartnell is back on form again. The good-bye's are well-done, a bit cold and stiff but then that is appropriate in this case. The dematerialization is satisfying, and a good shot of the travellers munching away in the console room while the Doctor adjusts controls all around the console gives us a good appetite for the next story with, if you're lucky enough to be watching the un-edited version on DVD, yet another cliffhanger leading into the next story. A good closing for a classic, and hats off to director Richard Martin for pulling it off.
Without fully realizing it at the time, Doctor Who had just set-up
its most iconic set of long term villains,
and did so with a solid dramatic story full of
atmospherics and other nice little touches,
inspiring a wave of Dalek-mania throughout Britain.
In short, this is yet another landmark classic that no serious fan
of the show will want to miss.
While the next television story will continue to put key
elements into place for the main characters and vehicle of the show,
and the best story of season one is also yet to come,
it is also useful to take a lot at how this first Dalek story
was translated into a less satisfying theatrical feature film.....
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