| Where No Man Has Gone Before
          |   |  | Strangely, Star Trek's first pilot didn't lead directly into a series.
         Instead, it lead to this second pilot, and a second chance to sell itself
         to a network according to their beliefs about what would make a great TV series.
         This opened the door for some big cast changes, some for better, some for worse.
         Enter William Shatner as our new Captain of the Enterprise. 
         In actual fact, three scripts were commissioned to compete for the job of
         second pilot.  Samuel Peeples' efforts eventually got the job done, with
         the other two scripts turning into regular episodes of the series later on.
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         Some of the strengths of this script include its methods of introducing
         audiences to the Trek universe and its population, and also that the central
         figures focused on today featured compelling levels of characterization.
         We also get the more standard action finish that many executives felt was missing
         from the previous pilot, and there are good levels of mystery and tension
         building towards this climax.  But sadly, the overall premise of today's story,
         though decent, really isn't all that grand or inspiring.
            
 Kirk's Crew PicksIt truly is bizarre that this story wasn't used for the first broadcast episode
         on September 8, 1966.  Production Executive Herb Solow says it was felt that
         this story was "too expository".  Exactly how does that hold up as a reason?
         If the audience is completely brand new to the Star Trek universe and its characters,
         why would they not want and need that exposition?  Sometimes I think those media
         professionals who habitually deride exposition need some kind of wake-up call
         to snap them out of their self-induced stupor.  Make exposition 
         more exciting and gorgeous and classic if you have to, but never avoid it or 
         hurriedly toss it off into the corner.  It's too important.
         And "Where No Man Has Gone Before" does a pretty good job of focusing on exploration
         first and foremost, taking us on a tour of the types of environments that 
         Star Trek will bring us week after week, and introducing many of the most important
         characters of the series.  It's not quite as good or quick at this as its predecessor
         "The Cage", but it's still solid.
          | This is the story that introduces us to Captain James Kirk,
         and we get some good insight into his personality and command style.  Most importantly
         of all, although he has clearly already met Mr. Spock before the story opens,
         this tale shows how they closed the gap of their initial philosophical differences
         to form a working relationship with each other... a relationship that they will
         enjoy and rely on throughout the rest of the show, and throughout the rest of their lives.
         That's good material for a first broadcast, and that material is a solid strength here. |   | 
 
         It's also a development that comes as a bit of a surprise to Captain Kirk, who 
         initially believes that his closest confidant on this five year mission will be
         his old academy buddy Gary Mitchell, played by actor Gary Lockwood who would go on
         to feature as astronaut Frank Poole in 
         Stanley Kubrick's classic sci-fi film "2001".
         The friendship between Kirk and Mitchell is played with a sense of fun and warmth
         by the actors, and becomes a successful backbone against which the events of the
         story take their toll.
              
         Also making his debut in this episode is Montgomery Scott, played by James Doohan.  
         Scotty gets a good number of lines to say and things to do in this story, including 
         appearing as the Chief Engineer in the line-up of department heads.  However, it is
         curious to see the character of pilot Lee Kelso, played by Paul Carr, spending far
         more screen time tackling engineering and technical fixes than Scotty does,
         and Scotty often seems to be reporting to him.  Is Kelso the real head of
         engineering at first?  Kelso is quite likeable, 
         and seems an easy shoe-in to become a regular or semi-regular.
         One is tempted to keep one's eyes peeled to see if he can be spotted in any
         future episodes... until, in this very episode,
         he becomes the first character to die on screen in Star Trek.
         Bummer.  But this also gives one the impression, perhaps falsely, that Scotty's
         duties were ramped up so that he could fill the gap created by Kelso's absence.
              
         Mr. Sulu makes his debut in this episode as well - although his role here is
         head of the astro-sciences department, showing off what a mathematics whiz he is,
         and getting hardly any screen time or lines.  Kelso's absence will benefit him
         even more so than Scotty, when he takes over the pilot's position for the rest
         of the series....
              
         Falling pretty flat is Paul Fix's bland portrayal of Dr. Piper, who, to be fair,
         doesn't really get a scene of any real significance in the entire show, although
         it does feel as though his examination of Mitchell in sickbay has had most of its 
         footage sent to the cutting room floor after the fact.  Is it in Vonda N. McIntyre's
         novel "Enterprise: The First Adventure" where it is retroactively rationalized 
         that Kirk always knew he wanted his colleague "Bones" McCoy along for this mission,
         but arranging McCoy's complicated transfer involved temporarily putting up 
         with Piper for a bit?
              
         Yeoman Smith is another casualty of lack of attention from the script, and she
         manages to have far less to do than her counterpart in the previous pilot, while
         she expresses virtually no emotion whatsoever while doing it.  It seems it would 
         have been better to not try to cast a regular yeoman until there is a script
         that is prepared to use the character in some fashion.
              
          | Another easy to forget series regular making his debut here in this episode
         is Mr. Leslie, played by Eddie Paskey.  Don't remember him?  Well, he's only
         a background "extra" character, often seen but only heard speaking lines in
         a few rare episodes, and even more rarely actually getting a credit at the end
         of the show.  He usually wears a red shirt while having an uncanny knack
         for staying alive, but today he's in blue.  He is most easily spotted on the
         planet, standing outside the cell with Kirk and Spock. |  |   | 
 
         Lastly amongst this crew is psychologist Dr. Elizabeth Dehner,
         played by Sally Kellerman, a character who has a small hint of the coldness
         of the previous pilot's Number One character, but who is much more emotionally
         rounded in general, and even passionate about her areas of expertise.
         She is also worthy of becoming a regular or semi-regular, but instead has
         an important story-specific role to play as a guest star.
              
 Astro-Sciences Reporting InThis story will squeak by with a grade of C- in astronomy.  Armed with foreknowledge
         of how our Milky Way Galaxy will be divided into four quadrants in future centuries
         in the Star Trek universe, quadrants that take a long time to cross and remain
         largely unexplored in Kirk's time, it seems a bit lax that this episode could
         have Kirk casually announce that the ship will now leave the galaxy, and that upon
         doing so will find it surrounded by a funky magical barrier.  Perhaps we have to
         think beyond the automatic impression that we get.... Perhaps we should think about
         the galaxy three-dimensionally, with the Enterprise not traveling out beyond the 
         external edge of the galactic disc, but rather "up" or "down" beyond the plane
         of the disc - a somewhat shorter and more plausible journey.  It's also more
         plausible if this barrier only covers a small section of the galaxy, perhaps
         a few hundred light years across, somewhere far from Earth's solar system.
         While the premises of "The Cage" and "Where No Man Has Gone Before" both work
         well to build up a sense of the Enterprise crew digging into mysteries and
         exploring unknowns, in both cases the plot uses a device perhaps best labeled
         with the phrase "going where someone else HAS gone before".  Both stories
         get great mileage from receiving messages from those who have gone before
         and had great difficulties, helping to raise the stakes and increase tensions.
         In astronomical terms though, this doesn't require that the barrier surround
         the entire galaxy - only that Kirk's crew should be aiming for more or less the
         same spot as the previous crew, so it's manageable.
            
         Today's planet only really comes up in the second half.  Its name "Delta Vega"
         feels as though it's been plucked out of the air by people who have heard
         Bayer notation from astronomers, but have no idea how to put it together themselves.
         A minor nit.
             
 I'm Asking What You Know About Mind PowerThis story tackles the topic of Extra-Sensory Perception, or ESP, which I thought
         was quite cool and forward-looking for the time.  This is actually just a springboard
         to get into all kinds of mental powers in a semi-plausible way.  I like that,
         and I think it worked fairly well.
         But the central premise falls down a bit in terms of how it remains subservient to
         the predetermined dramatic arc of the episode.  To me, it doesn't feel like there
         is sufficient reason given for Gary Mitchell to rapidly develop towards villainy.
         The best thing we actually have is the concept that his knowledge is expanding
         to such profound levels, that we can truly have no concept of all the new things
         filling his mind - and somewhere in that nebulous mass of new thought he has
         sufficient reason.
              
         What it really feels like is that the "smaller minds" have control over nature here.
         Whatever Kirk and Spock and Kelso and Sulu fear most dictates what Mitchell
         will turn into, whether that makes sense for Mitchell or not.  I actually think
         Anakin Skywalker's moral decline in the Star Wars prequels was more believable,
         because it starts out with him simply wanting to hold on to the people he loves
         and cares about, and he uses his powers to try to maintain attachments.  Far more
         relatable.  Mitchell seems too keen to discard his relationships in this one.
         To what extent are Kirk and Spock and friends forcing this choice on him
         by fueling their own fears and acting on them?
             
         And so, in a sense, this ends up being a much darker story than its predecessor
         "The Cage", and has a largely down-beat ending, but for the first formative sparks 
         of the Kirk-Spock relationship.
             
 The Evolution of Spock's PhilosophyThe story is also one of the big anchor points for the evolutionary journey
         of Spock's own philosophies.  Beginning here, we will often hear Spock justify
         his thoughts as being logical, without truly examining the over-arching philosophy
         that his logic is used to support.  At this early end of the spectrum, his logic
         supports fear.  Spock isn't getting emotional about his fears, but he is definitely
         acting on the philosophy of fear.  His concerns are the survival and protection
         of himself, and his ship and shipmates, and he is prepared to go to murderous lengths
         to achieve those goals.  It is actually a sad place that we see him in here, where 
         he is really faced with the unknown, and does not greet it with the olive branch
         of hope and goodwill, nor does he have faith that bright trained Starfleet officers
         will maintain any loyalty to their fellow species when their abilities are
         exponentially increased.  But there is yet hope for Spock and he will grow.  
         The other end of this journey, in 
         the sixth feature film and 
         the Next Generation story "Unification",
         will see him completing a total turnaround on this point, and that also
         will be done with equal amounts of logic.
         Production value remains high for this story as it was for the previous pilot,
         re-using the difficult-to-light mountain cyclorama for the planet set,
         adding new elements to the planet and the Enterprise,
         including all desired special effects for laser blasts and space barriers,
         and achieving a number of the all-time classic model shots for the Enterprise,
         now smartly sprinkled throughout the story wherever necessary.  
         I particularly like the additional red highlights that have been
         painted all around the bridge, bringing the colours to life in this
         very important set.  All very good.
                 
         Interestingly, though it seems to escape the notice
         of some viewers, we actually have three uniform colours for the crew at
         this point.  Apart from the strong blue of the science people, Kirk is
         wearing a yellow shirt that has a slight tint towards green, as do many
         of the others on the crew.  However, there is also a very light
         "peach" coloured shirt as well, as worn by Gary Mitchell, Scotty, and
         a few others.  It does register nearly the same as the yellow to the
         casual eye, and I think that the move to a much bolder red for the
         rest of the series was ultimately a good move.  
              This is a very good second pilot, and it worked well and sold the series to
         its first network.  However, something of the essential philosophy of Star Trek
         doesn't quite come through in this story.  It has a somewhat less than positive
         approach to humanity's ability to explore and deal with the unknown, or to appreciate
         that which is different.
 
         Thankfully, the network gave Star Trek a chance to do better, as it ordered
         up a full season of episodes to follow....
         
       Read the next Star Trek review:
      "The Corbomite Maneuver"
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